Wow, Chelsey, what a great piece of writing. It made me feel as though I really had "vertigo". The "baby" simile is perfect as well. I wonder where this photo was actually taken?
Hey Mr P thanks for commenting on my blog, I wonder where this picture is taken? I might ask Miss O'shea where do she get this picture? but if you had to take a guess where this could be, what would you say? BLOG YA LATER THANKS FOR COMMENTING Chelsy!
Kia ora Chelsy. Thanks for sharing your writing. You have done a great job of setting the mood by making the reader feel like they are really there by writing about the senses - what you see, feel etc. As Mr P said - the baby simile was fantastic. Keep up the great writing!
Wow, Chelsey, what a great piece of writing. It made me feel as though I really had "vertigo". The "baby" simile is perfect as well. I wonder where this photo was actually taken?
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Kia ora Chelsy. Thanks for sharing your writing. You have done a great job of setting the mood by making the reader feel like they are really there by writing about the senses - what you see, feel etc. As Mr P said - the baby simile was fantastic. Keep up the great writing!
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